:04:00
Now youre talking.
:04:04
I need some feedback,
and theres no one here to help me.
:04:07
Got your story here. Wow.
:04:09
I have the sneaking suspicion
that my English teacher is illiterate.
:04:13
I noticed you used a lot of big words.
Nice. Good for you.
:04:17
It was a little long, so I didnt
read the whole thing.
:04:21
But who cares?
Cause I gave you an A.
:04:24
My brother, Lance, is perpetually
recovering from the night before.
:04:33
Im sorry.
I dont feel good.
:04:38
My girlfriend is the only one
whos actually read my work.
:04:41
But shes always so positive,
its hard to take her seriously.
:04:44
Its, like, the best story
Ive ever read.
:04:48
Really?
:04:49
Its funny and original.
:04:53
I mean...
:04:55
I think it could be a movie.
:05:07
I dont know if Orange County
is the best environment...
:05:09
for an aspiring writer...
:05:11
so Im applying to Stanford.
:05:15
You are a shoo-in.
:05:18
Do you think I should apply
to some safety schools?
:05:21
No need.
Dont be a scaredy-cat.
:05:23
Theres no doubt in my mind
youre gonna go to Berkeley.
:05:27
Stanford.
:05:28
Yes. Stanford is where
youre going, mister.
:05:32
Im sending you
a copy of my story.
:05:35
Hopefully,
with your wisdom and guidance...
:05:37
I will one day be a real writer.
:05:41
I look forward to seeing you
in the fall, Mr. Skinner.
:05:44
Your greatest admirer,
Shaun Brumder.