:23:09
Vi: "So John
flipped her around,
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and slammed her
against the wall.
:23:15
Jane braced herself.
:23:19
She thought
about her mother.
:23:21
She thought
about Peter.
:23:23
She thought
about God...
:23:25
and rape.
:23:28
Say, 'Fuck me,
Nigger,
:23:30
fuck me hard.'
:23:32
John's flesh
abraded her soft skin.
:23:36
There would be marks.
:23:38
She acquiesced
:23:40
and said what
he asked her to say,
:23:43
and did what he
asked her to do.
:23:47
She had entered college
with hope,
:23:50
with dignity,
:23:53
but she would
graduate as a whore."
:24:07
Why do people
have to be so ugly,
:24:10
write about such ugly characters?
It's perverted.
:24:14
I know you all think
I'm being prissy,
:24:17
but I don't care.
I was brought up in a certain way,
:24:20
and this is...
:24:22
mean-spirited.
:24:25
Yeah. Well...
:24:29
it did seem a little...
:24:31
affected.
:24:33
Like by using taboo language,
you were trying
:24:38
to shock us about the hollowness
of your characters.
:24:43
I think it was
a little bit racist.
:24:46
It was completely racist.
:24:48
Beyond that, I felt
deeply offended as a woman.
:24:52
As if women could
only operate
:24:54
from experiences
of objectification.
:24:56
- Totally phallocentric.
- So weirdly misogynistic.