:26:00
Shes just a spoiled
suburban white girl
:26:03
with a Benetton
rainbow complex.
:26:06
Its just my opinion,
and what do I know,
:26:09
but I think it's
a callow piece of writing.
:26:15
Callow... and coy.
:26:19
Jane wants more, but isn't
honest enough to admit it.
:26:23
In the end she returns
to the safety of her crippled--
:26:26
translation,
sexually impotent-- boyfriend.
:26:31
This is bullshit!
Her story was the truth!
:26:34
- Right.
- It's unbelievable!
:26:37
- It's cliched!
- It's disgusting!
:26:39
But it happened!
:26:47
I don't know
about what happened, Vi,
:26:50
because once
you start writing,
:26:52
it all becomes fiction.
:26:54
Still...
:26:57
it certainly is an improvement
over your last story.
:27:01
There is now at least
:27:03
a beginning, a middle,
:27:05
and an end.
:27:27
Woman:
"Toby,
:27:28
I just know you're
going to become a movie star.
:27:30
Please don't forget me
when you make it to the top.
:27:33
I will always love you.
Pam."
:27:43
( touch tones )
:27:55
- Woman: Hello?
- Hello.
:27:58
Is this Pam?