:02:30
( moaning )
:02:58
Hey, you want to hearmy short story now?
:03:02
Huh?
:03:09
I couldread it to you.
:03:12
You mean, again?
:03:15
I changed the endinga little.
:03:19
Oh.What happens now?
:03:23
Well, actually,it's the same
:03:27
but longer.
:03:29
I think it's better.More... raw.
:03:33
Then maybe you shouldjust read the ending.
:03:37
But it won't make sense
:03:39
if you hear itout of context.
:03:44
I think you should leave itthe way it was.
:03:47
It was good.
:03:53
So you don't wantto hear my new ending?
:03:59
You'll read itin class tomorrow.
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